Hi all!
To let everyone know, free partial manuscript critique is now a benefit of A Writer’s Path Writers Club. Here is the page for the free services, accessed only by active members:
https://ryanlanz.com/writers-club-free-services/
(password protected)
We’re adding new free services all the time. In fact, I just added free query editing, free proposal editing, and free manuscript editing today.
If you’re not a current member, check out our club!