Excellent Writing tips by D Wallace Peach over at Myths in The Mirror blog!

My guess is I don’t need to tell you what doesn’t work about this passage: Mary rifled through the suitcase that John dropped on the bed. “John, have you seen my camera?” Mary’s hands flew to her hips and she scowled. “I’m certain you packed it, Mary.” John scratched his head. It wouldn’t be the […]

via Writing Tip: Names versus Pronouns — Myths of the Mirror

3 Comments Add yours

  1. Thanks so much for sharing, Didi. Happy Writing!

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    1. You’re most welcome 😊🤗

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