If we were #poem

If emotions were pools – I’d be shallow.

If guarded egos were balloons – You’d be a blimp.

If hearts were flowers – We’d be wild

If bravery were fish – I’d be a shrimp

But if your wall had a crack – I would find it

And if your heart were a net – I’d swim in

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24 Comments Add yours

  1. Wow 😳 awesome such great penned lines, what a flair and depth in your words. Fantastic.👍👍👍👍👍👍

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    1. Didi Oviatt says:

      Thank you!! 🤗 I don’t write a whole lot of poetry, so I’m a little out of practice… you compliment means the world!

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  2. Eccentric Muse says:

    Ah, this is sweet! 🙂

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    1. Thank you! Seemed to fit the valentine’s mood 😉

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      1. Eccentric Muse says:

        You’re most welcome! 🙂

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  3. Wow, Didi!! This was wonderful on so many levels. It was very clever, creative in thought and presentation and humorous but also emotional and romantic at the end. A real rollercoaster that was fun to read!

    You should do more poems!! They are really fun and can really reach out and touch someone’s heart in just a few words. Please checkout the work on “Inside the mind of DavyD”; Singledust; Sailorpoet; BraveandReckless; Tanya Cliff, and Heartafire and PoetGirlEm. Oh, yeah! You can come visit me anytime!

    I can highly recommend the following book as it really helped me – https://jadeedgeblog.wordpress.com/2016/11/19/changes/comment-page-1/#comment-81

    See You soon!

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    1. Thanks! I’ll absolutly check it out 😍

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  4. Reblogged this on By the Mighty Mumford and commented:
    ORT-ORT-ORT-ORT—BRAVO!!!!

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  5. raistlin0903 says:

    Really beautiful! Have a great and relaxing weekend 😊

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    1. Thank you so much! It was a fun one to write. My weekend was actually pretty crazy lol. I’m ready to sleep for a couple days 😉 NOT!

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      1. raistlin0903 says:

        Lol,😂😂😂 Haha, well hopefully you will be able to get a little bit of rest at least this week 😊😊

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      2. I think I will!! HAHA 😉

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      1. moorezart says:

        You’re welcome!

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  6. This is a lovely poem, Didi.

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  7. Lovely poem Didi. It’s a nice mix of tender, evocative, and playful. 🙂

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  8. Noeyrocks says:

    Well written lovely:)

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