If emotions were pools – I’d be shallow.
If guarded egos were balloons – You’d be a blimp.
If hearts were flowers – We’d be wild
If bravery were fish – I’d be a shrimp
But if your wall had a crack – I would find it
And if your heart were a net – I’d swim in
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Lovely!😊
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Thanks 🤗
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Wow 😳 awesome such great penned lines, what a flair and depth in your words. Fantastic.👍👍👍👍👍👍
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Thank you!! 🤗 I don’t write a whole lot of poetry, so I’m a little out of practice… you compliment means the world!
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Welcome
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Ah, this is sweet! 🙂
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Thank you! Seemed to fit the valentine’s mood 😉
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You’re most welcome! 🙂
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Wow, Didi!! This was wonderful on so many levels. It was very clever, creative in thought and presentation and humorous but also emotional and romantic at the end. A real rollercoaster that was fun to read!
You should do more poems!! They are really fun and can really reach out and touch someone’s heart in just a few words. Please checkout the work on “Inside the mind of DavyD”; Singledust; Sailorpoet; BraveandReckless; Tanya Cliff, and Heartafire and PoetGirlEm. Oh, yeah! You can come visit me anytime!
I can highly recommend the following book as it really helped me – https://jadeedgeblog.wordpress.com/2016/11/19/changes/comment-page-1/#comment-81
See You soon!
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Thanks! I’ll absolutly check it out 😍
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ORT-ORT-ORT-ORT—BRAVO!!!!
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Really beautiful! Have a great and relaxing weekend 😊
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Thank you so much! It was a fun one to write. My weekend was actually pretty crazy lol. I’m ready to sleep for a couple days 😉 NOT!
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Lol,😂😂😂 Haha, well hopefully you will be able to get a little bit of rest at least this week 😊😊
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I think I will!! HAHA 😉
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Thanks for sharing! 🙂
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You’re welcome!
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This is a lovely poem, Didi.
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Thanks, Robbie
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Lovely poem Didi. It’s a nice mix of tender, evocative, and playful. 🙂
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Well written lovely:)
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Thank you!:)
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